I can definitely see where I can (and want to) add to my argument, but so far my essay is doing well! Have lots to improve upon, but a good idea of where I am and where I need to be. Need to imbed my citations and quotes as well, that is my next step and probably what’s most glaringly wrong at the moment.
Rough Draft Document: Here.
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